Rock Star Cheetah

Hi!

Here is one of my stories from my writing class:

 Rock Star Cheetah was mean.  She was as mean as a cat.  She was meaner than a cat, she was as mean as a cheetah.She howled at the crowd.  She purred to the audience. She ran around the stage really fast.  But there was one thing she couldn't do though...Roar!  She couldn't roar!