My writing class

Hi!
Yesterday I had writing class.  Here is one of the stories i wrote :  Once there was a girl named kitty.  She was going to Hawaii.  Soon she was on the plane and landed in Hawaii.  She went to a place called Alani, a Disney hotel.  First they showed her, her room.  Then she said "Hawabunga!" and jumped in the pool.  After that she slid down the slide.  Then she went in the jacuzzi and then she went to in her room to sleep.
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